Sunday 30 August 2015

Who is going to be with you?
And how long?
Why do you cry over?
Is moving on so hard?

Life,
Which is so precious!.
Do you actually wanna spoil it?
Under the name of love?
Love failure?

Life is too big, people say!

But its too short,
To live in,.
To experience!
To know what worth is it?
So be practical enough and
Choose your way!

There are actually lot of things,
That you can do,
Else than crying and dragging
Over left things,

So many rides,.
Food, people to enjoy with,.experience with!

So chill!
And enjoy the cup of your tea!
Else than,
Loosing your dignity!

Shashwati Patil

Undefined

What is love?

How do you define love?
How do you express it?
Can you feel love?
Do you feel loved?

Can you measure love?
If yeah?
How is it weighed?
Is it conditional?
Or unconditional?

Scratching hand,
Crying over it,
Drinking and smoking,.
Isn't solution for the love!

Love is happiness!
If happiness exists,
You can love,
And also be loved enough!

Stop doing non sense things,
Quiting your life,
Isn't really fine!
There is no stupidness than it!

All promises can't be full filled!
Everything can't go as you wish!

Its life,
Ain't fairy tale!
But believe me,
Happiness exists!

Shashwati Patil.

Saturday 22 August 2015

Review

Hey dad meet my mom!!

Yes. Wonderful roller coaster ride I ever had in life, whiling watching such a amazing story!
I always kept wondering what is it all about?
The book? And the title!

And today am done with the book!
Oh yes! Sandeep the book is really amazing!
I have seen your efforts, I can see the zeal of writing!

while reading it, half way I had constant smile on my face! And whenever I giggled my parents were ����, what's happening?
I din even have time to answer them!

Anyway! And the book,
Rishi, a ten year old, writing about a child isn't any easy, summing up his thoughts and the reactions is simply awesome!

While reading I felt like,
I was enjoying my journey in train to Bangalore, and half way, am travelling to Puna, two different directions, that's how the book goes!

Myra is such a sweetheart,
You made the character very beautifully, efficiently., the understanding and love is too beautiful!

And roshni is cutest gal, the power of LOVE is shown in this book, very differently, in rest of the stories, the guy or gal, may end up fighting with parents and brothers, and even more MELO DRAMA, but nothing as such!
Although its fiction,
Its well executed!
Well written!
Its nice that at time of writing was with practical thinking as well!

Its true love and nothing else❤

Those lil poems before starting a chapter added some thrilling, making everything so perfect is very nice.
And the way narrating the entire story is also nyak, too great!
Never was I bored, good job.

Thanks for the book BTW! ��
Your work is clean!
Am sure, the efforts you put in writing this has brought such a beautiful book by now!

Good job!
Keep writing!
Keep inspiring!
Keep going!
Stay blessed!